As I was starting on the new rough draft I began to realize that I was just trying to rewrite what I had already written. Nothing much was going to be different, just adding some details. So I have combined the two drafts and I hope that it will turn out just as I hope it will.
As a reward for your patience, I am submitting a new chapter to the site. Please review and crtique it as you will.
As Always, Enjoy.